the world DOWN BELOW4

        Connie was watching Lord Burrito Bansickle gobble down every, precious, pickle in Larry’s jar. She felt sorry for her brother. he was a pickle FREAK.

       Lord Burrito enjoyed this moment of slurping, licking and cruching the various pickles. Larry wore a concerned face that read,  Please, not ALL of them…

        Gilda was typing something on Google in the search button of images. She typed: Lord Burrito bansickle. Even though they were, like, right in front of him, she could not she his terrible pickle juice showered face in the dark tree trunk.

       Once the phone had loaded the images, she glanced at them one by one.

       Oh eww…. yechh… disgusting!

       It was his “internal Organs” aka the cheese and tomatoes and sourcream, the inside of a normal burrito.

        Why has he not had a pickle before, I mean, they’re always on sale at Hy-Vee….

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3 responses to “the world DOWN BELOW4

  1. yes lol

  2. It’s great!But you put “Even though they were, like, right in front of him, she could not she his terrible pickle juice showered face in the dark tree trunk.” Did you mean “see” instead of “she” ?

  3. Nice writing! It’s funny! 😀

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